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PostSubject: Apocalypto - The Apocalypse Survivor   Thu Oct 02, 2008 7:00 pm



Apocalypto - The Apocalypse Survivor
Range: 125 | Move Speed: 320
Primary: STR
Str: 23 + 2.19 | Agi: 22 + 1.75 | Int: 20 + 2.01
Damage: 63 - 65 | HP: 587 | Mana: 260
HP Regen: 0.94 | Mana Regen: 0.81
Attack Speed: 1.25 | Armor: 5

Hero Story

Lived in the jungle with his family, he uses his resourcefulness to get away any needs for his family and for himself. But, One day, he and his family were arrested for them to be sacrifices. He saved his family but not himself. He endured all physical and emotional pain while away from his family and shortening his way to the sacrificial pit. Once he was the next to the sacrificial pit. The first apocalypse came. He was the only survivor. He goes back to where he left his family but there is no one to be found. This set his fury and made him to train with the sentinel. He will avenge with his apocalyptic powers that made him the apocalypse survivor.

Hero Skills


Apocalyptic Beam (C)
In his training, he trained to use the powers of the great apocalypse. This beam came from the excessive energy of the apocalypse. He controlled it by making beams from it. This deals damage that will kill anyone that has a weak heart.
Level 1 - Creates a beam from the apocalypse that will deal 100 damage in a 200 AoE and stun for a short amount of time.
Level 2 - Creates a beam from the apocalypse that will deal 175 damage in a 200 AoE and stuns for a short amount of time.
Level 3 - Creates a beam from the apocalypse that will deal 215 damage in a 200 AoE and stuns for a short amount of time.
Level 4 - Creates a beam from the apocalypse that will deal 250 damage in a 200 AoE and stuns for a short amount of time.
0.01 casting time, 0.05 time of the beam going down, 525 casting range, 0.25 mini-stun.
Mana Cost: 100/125/150/175
Cooldown: 16/12/12/10
Framework: Like Leshrac's Lightning storm but the color is color blue.
Notes: Has a mini-stun that can stop channeling spells


Fury of the Father's Heart (F)
Because of that he did not found his family alive again. This set his heart rage into a fury that will do everything to revenge his family. But, because of the exhaustion he loses life after doing it.
Level 1 - Damage raises up by 15% and MS is boosted by 5%
Level 2 - Damage raises up by 20% and MS is boosted by 10%
Level 3 - Damage raises up by 25% and MS is boosted by 15%
Level 4 - Damage raises up by 30% and MS is boosted by 20%
Pays 100 HP/150 HP/200 HP/150 HP
Mana Cost: N/A
Cooldown: 25/20/15/10
Framework: Red mist covers his body.
Notes: This will make you more of a damager than of a tanker.


Mind of the Resourceful (D)
Because of that he lives in the jungles, he adopts resourcefulness in the jungle. This will raise most of his powers.
Level 1 - Apocalyptic Beam deals 20 more damage.
Level 2 - Apocalyptic Beam deals 30 more damage.
Level 3 - Apocalyptic Beam deals 40 more damage.
Level 4 - Apocalyptic Beam deals 50 more damage and an additional of 0.25 second stun.
Mana Cost:N/A
Cooldown: N/A


The Great Apocalypse (G)
He now sends forth the great apocalypse that will damage all alive units within the map.
Level 1 - Deals 200 damage to all visible units in the map.
Level 2 - Deals 250 damage to all visible units in the map.
Level 3 - Deals 300 damage to all visible units in the map
Channeling: 100 damage for 1 seconds. Lvl 1: 2 second channeling time. Lvl 2: 2.5 second channeling time. Lvl 3: 3 second channeling time
Mana Cost: 200/150/100
Cooldown: 175/150/125
Framework: The screen turns red during channeling time.

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PostSubject: Re: Apocalypto - The Apocalypse Survivor   Thu Oct 02, 2008 7:15 pm

that will be strongest hero in dota!
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PostSubject: Re: Apocalypto - The Apocalypse Survivor   Thu Oct 02, 2008 7:58 pm

We will soonly have item and hero idea section.
It will be still, in subforum form, and that will allow users to submit hero and/or item ideas as easy as posting message.

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PostSubject: Re: Apocalypto - The Apocalypse Survivor   Thu Oct 02, 2008 10:23 pm

that will be good!
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PostSubject: Re: Apocalypto - The Apocalypse Survivor   Fri Oct 03, 2008 9:50 am

Nice hero!
But may be need some buff for the 3rd and ultimate skill.
I mean d 3rd is a passive, right? Then it will be better to add some passive skills as well, may be like increasing ms / hp pool / hp regen / increase the ultimate damage, etc.
And for the ultimate, since it is an ultimate, IMO the damage is too low, esp late game, 300 dmg every 125 s doesnt mean too much.
You cud may be make it pure damage, or buff via 3rd skill, or adding stun, etc.
For balancing, may be u cud lower base dmg or d first skill.

Btw it will be nice when we have the hero and item idea section.

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PostSubject: Re: Apocalypto - The Apocalypse Survivor   Fri Oct 03, 2008 5:16 pm

Lol. Apocalypto is a great movie!

Nice hero but its abit imba in places;

- His base stats and stat gain are way too high, maybe nerf it to something like:
Str: 23 + 2.19 | Agi: 19 + 1.75 | Int: 15 + 1.3~

- His ms is insane! You need to nerf it because you've given him an ms boost in his 2nd skill, so something like 290-300 base ms should be fine.

- I agree with ExcalibuR about the 3rd skill, you might want to add to it.

- The base atk could do with a slight nerf too though.

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PostSubject: Re: Apocalypto - The Apocalypse Survivor   Fri Oct 03, 2008 7:02 pm

KB wrote:


Apocalypto - The Apocalypse Survivor
Range: 125 | Move Speed: 300
Primary: STR
Str: 23 + 2.19 | Agi: 19 + 1.75 | Int: 15 + 1.3
Damage: 63 - 65 | HP: 587 | Mana: 260
HP Regen: 0.94 | Mana Regen: 0.81
Attack Speed: 1.25 | Armor: 5

Hero Story

Lived in the jungle with his family, he uses his resourcefulness to get away any needs for his family and for himself. But, One day, he and his family were arrested for them to be sacrifices. He saved his family but not himself. He endured all physical and emotional pain while away from his family and shortening his way to the sacrificial pit. Once he was the next to the sacrificial pit. The first apocalypse came. He was the only survivor. He goes back to where he left his family but there is no one to be found. This set his fury and made him to train with the sentinel. He will avenge with his apocalyptic powers that made him the apocalypse survivor.

Hero Skills


Apocalyptic Beam (C)
In his training, he trained to use the powers of the great apocalypse. This beam came from the excessive energy of the apocalypse. He controlled it by making beams from it. This deals damage that will kill anyone that has a weak heart.
Level 1 - Creates a beam from the apocalypse that will deal 100 damage in a 200 AoE and stun for a short amount of time.
Level 2 - Creates a beam from the apocalypse that will deal 175 damage in a 200 AoE and stuns for a short amount of time.
Level 3 - Creates a beam from the apocalypse that will deal 215 damage in a 200 AoE and stuns for a short amount of time.
Level 4 - Creates a beam from the apocalypse that will deal 250 damage in a 200 AoE and stuns for a short amount of time.
0.01 casting time, 0.05 time of the beam going down, 525 casting range, 0.25 mini-stun.
Mana Cost: 100/125/150/175
Cooldown: 16/12/12/10
Framework: Like Leshrac's Lightning storm but the color is color blue.
Notes: Has a mini-stun that can stop channeling spells


Fury of the Father's Heart (F)
Because of that he did not found his family alive again. This set his heart rage into a fury that will do everything to revenge his family. But, because of the exhaustion he loses life after doing it.
Level 1 - Damage raises up by 15% and MS is boosted by 5%
Level 2 - Damage raises up by 20% and MS is boosted by 10%
Level 3 - Damage raises up by 25% and MS is boosted by 15%
Level 4 - Damage raises up by 30% and MS is boosted by 20%
Pays 100 HP/150 HP/200 HP/150 HP
Mana Cost: N/A
Cooldown: 25/20/15/10
Framework: Red mist covers his body.
Notes: This will make you more of a damager than of a tanker.


Mind of the Resourceful (D)
Because of that he lives in the jungles, he adopts resourcefulness in the jungle. This will raise most of his powers.
Level 1 - Apocalyptic Beam deals 20 more damage and The Great Apocalypse slow unit's AS and MS for 10%
Level 2 - Apocalyptic Beam deals 30 more damage and The Great Apocalypse slow unit's AS and MS for 12%
Level 3 - Apocalyptic Beam deals 40 more damage and The Great Apocalypse slow unit's AS and MS for 17%
Level 4 - Apocalyptic Beam deals 50 more damage and an additional of 0.25 second stun. The Great Apocalypse slow unit's AS and MS for 20%
Mana Cost:N/A
Cooldown: N/A


The Great Apocalypse (G)
He now sends forth the great apocalypse that will damage all alive units within the map.
Level 1 - Deals 200 damage to all visible units in the map.
Level 2 - Deals 250 damage to all visible units in the map.
Level 3 - Deals 300 damage to all visible units in the map
Channeling: 100 damage for 1 seconds. Lvl 1: 2 second channeling time. Lvl 2: 2.5 second channeling time. Lvl 3: 3 second channeling time
Mana Cost: 200/150/100
Cooldown: 175/150/125
Framework: The screen turns red during channeling time.



I just can't make make TGA a pure damage because it can damage units everwhere that there is visibility.

LOL.

I edited this.
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PostSubject: Re: Apocalypto - The Apocalypse Survivor   Fri Oct 03, 2008 8:41 pm

You could go to other website that create maps though, In order to propose your own very hero to exist on a game.
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PostSubject: Re: Apocalypto - The Apocalypse Survivor   Sat Oct 04, 2008 5:14 am

That's not right, .

STR and INT gain are too high, xD

cheating! haha! ..

STR type with lots of INT,

spammable skills, . .
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PostSubject: Re: Apocalypto - The Apocalypse Survivor   Sat Oct 04, 2008 11:50 am

LOL

It's just right.

It's a synergy for his skills.
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PostSubject: Re: Apocalypto - The Apocalypse Survivor   Sat Oct 04, 2008 5:35 pm

Its not "just right"... its just plain imba.

I wrote:

- His base stats and stat gain are way too high, maybe nerf it to something like:
Str: 23 + 2.19 | Agi: 19 + 1.75 | Int: 15 + 1.3~

- His ms is insane! You need to nerf it because you've given him an ms boost in his 2nd skill, so something like 290-300 base ms should be fine.

- I agree with ExcalibuR about the 3rd skill, you might want to add to it.

- The base atk could do with a slight nerf too though.

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PostSubject: Re: Apocalypto - The Apocalypse Survivor   Mon Oct 06, 2008 2:12 pm

EDIT: title editted to the more suitable one.

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PostSubject: Re: Apocalypto - The Apocalypse Survivor   Mon Oct 06, 2008 5:42 pm

Hey I edited it.

Can't you see my qoute there.
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PostSubject: Re: Apocalypto - The Apocalypse Survivor   Mon Oct 06, 2008 6:34 pm

Oh i see. ><

I thought it would be changed in the first post as well. My bad.

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PostSubject: Re: Apocalypto - The Apocalypse Survivor   Tue Oct 07, 2008 5:04 pm

Sadly, admin don't wanna let us edit our own post here.
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